RHP

RHP User

M55

Love some input from the brains trust

April 21 2017

Hi I'm pretty new to this but I love how the people on here are so friendly and helpful. I've looked around at other profiles and taken advice I've seen given to others on the forums but there is nothing like having a critical appraisal. I'd like to hear if you think there is anything I could do to improve how I represent myself because things are going pretty slowly so far. That's OK but I'd like to put my best foot forward for the best chance. Cheers

Comments

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    If I was to give advice it would really only relate to certain pet peeves and preferences of mine, and I don't think there's really much point in having people change profiles over that because what annoys me would be no problem for others. Everyone is different and you'll never please everyone, but I can't see anything in your profile that would be a turn off or problem for a lot of people.

  • EarthQueen

    EarthQueen

    9 years ago

    It looks fine all good - Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    What to put in my profile so that I get laid?? I dont do these "help me write a better profile"threads any more.Just be honest and represent who you are. Not bits of other people. If you are after someone compatable, then construct your profile your way, not from what you think others want to read. Or its not really you is it?

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Honest looking profile, smiling face shot, no dick pics in public album and grammar is fine. You've avoided the big obvious hurdles, so now it's just seeing who bites. - Posted from rhpmobile

  • FredAndGinger2

    FredAndGinger2

    9 years ago

    People connect to people, not profiles. Get out to the various meet and greet social nights. - Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    im thinking thats the way to go it seems and we are starting to agree

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Especially love the butt pic ;) - Posted from rhpmobile

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Thanks to everyone for your kind help and opinions👍 Meander- I see your point so I have rewritten that section. It still conveys the same information but it reads in a much more poitive way. FredAndGinger2- you are right I will have to put some effort into getting to the meet and greets. UNIteD17- Thanks, I actually just took and added that after reading a thread on the forums about the appeal of butts😉 I don't see it so it didnt occur to me to show it on here.

  • MissBishere

    MissBishere

    9 years ago

    Face pic without the sunnies and hat would be my only advice. Even just in your private gallery

  • RHP

    RHP User

    9 years ago

    Overall your profile reads well and you come across like a decent and fun guy. Very minor points:- a few typos, which is a big deal to some (hygiene and comma spacing)- unusually placed "??" suggests emojis might not be consistent in how they appear so you may want to leave them out- saying you like athletic, slim or average followed by saying petite women rocking your world sounds a bit inconsistent (be honest about what you are really looking for)- the first line of the last paragraph (It's a modern world...) is unnecessary However, as a single guy it will take a while to get traction, and it will be more about you making effective, tailored approaches to others.