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  Rlee552

  8 years ago

  Shots of you, shots of him. Honest to what you want. You will be okay. Curious though why your answer to protection is different for the both of you -doesn’t make a difference, just curious.

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  AnnieWhichway

  8 years ago

  But nothing to make it stand out from the thousands of similar couples seeking the golden unicorn. You need something to stand out but combined with lots of messaging to pique interest. It's even harder than a single Male trying to get a root....

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  RHP User

  8 years ago

  I’d include together shots of you both...else it’s just two people that’s not really suggesting you’re more than that sorry to say... The lady half though is a non smoker...but nothing filled in for mr....this will have people erring on that he smokes....whilst he may not, there’s nothing definitive, unlike the social drinking that’s definitive for both.... I didn’t notice the protection thing as I merely just quickly glance over a few key things for me(yes I need a sex change eh?? Lol).... Your wording seems fine but it does blend in as Annie says....try and add some personality into the wording so that the readers get a picture of how fun you are with a few of your key individual traits thrown in as well.... - Posted from rhpmobile

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  Freaky_Fun

  8 years ago

  There is nothing in your profile that would make me look twice at it. The wording isn't fine. The majority of us bi girls aren't here just to be other people's play toys which is how your profile reads, we actually like friendship and interaction. Not sure how many times you can mention nsa, it's ok we get it.

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  RHP User

  8 years ago

  I thought the same thing when I read it. OP - why would I pick your profile over the next one? What makes you special? I don’t get any sense of how you are going to make me feel special. All I get from your profile is that you guys just want to meet and fuck and that’s it. - Posted from rhpmobile

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  RHP User

  8 years ago

  Following your advice, Have changed the wording and a couple of other things. I’ve (Mrs) been in a situation when I was younger with a long term ex where a threesome turned into more and I was badly hurt and bore the consequences. I have grown a lot but am still a little weary, Hubby and I are easy going, only have a couple of very loose rules but to protect myself I am upfront about it being nsa. Didn’t realise I went over the top with it tho, so thanks for bringing it to my attention. If I’m honest though we do just wanna have some friendly, flirty or dirty chats, meet, have some drinks and if we all click, fuck. Freaky_fun please let me know if it’s worded better now. Thanks Kylie and Luke xx - Posted from rhpmobile

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