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Story - Alley

February 25 2018

My first attempt at story writing... --- "What about this one?", she queried as we walked hand in hand down the street. I peered down the alley. It was a long and dark, flanked by a house on either side. In one house a light was on. "I don't know, there's a light on", I replied nervously. "But it's perfect otherwise". We looked around to check the street for people then quietly crept down the alley. We stopped when we reached a part of the wall between two windows. The wall was cold and had a rough texture, almost like sandpaper. I pushed her back against the wall and pressed myself against her. We kissed, deeply, her excitement evident with the passion in her lips. I slid my hand down, squeezing her ass firmly. She grabbed my hand by the wrist and placed it roughly up her dress, onto her panty-covered cunt. I pressed a finger to the material covering her clit; she moaned. Slowly, I worked my finger side to side on her clit, I hear her excitement. Again she grabs my hand, forcing it lower, the request clear. I push the material aside and slip a finger into her wet cunt. Her face turns to one of raw pleasure as I push a second finger inside. Quickly I thrust my fingers in and out of her dripping cunt. Her face freezes and she comes. "I want your cock in my cunt.", she whispers in my ear. My excitement is uncontrolled as I unbuckle my belt and lower my jeans. Pushing her against the cold concrete wall I place my cock at the entrance to her wet cunt. I push forward. My cock disappears inside of her. I start to fuck her. "Harder, fuck me harder", she tells me. I fuck her hard and fast and can feel my own orgasm building. We continue to fuck in the alley, between to houses, one with the light still on. I come. - Posted from rhpmobile

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RHP User

8 years ago

mate.. SHE didn't Cum!!!NEXT time.. just walk along the street... find a decently strong looking car.. turn her around to face it and push her into it.. start to spend a little time "Warming her up" to the thought of THIS is where it is going to happen...then take her from behind,, right there on the side of someone else's car, in the street.. under the lights.. in full view.. (I reckon you will get a few "Beeps" on the horns..)Illegal?? of course it fucking is... but, SO Is sneaking down an alley to do it there too..AND mate... if SHE doesn't cum before you, then you need to lift your fucking game.. Keep the stories coming though.. I have a dear (Older) Lady friend who used to write exotic stories for all sorts of magazines under different names, but she actually was commissioned by some of the magazines to submit specific stories.. AND got paid pretty well for it..

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GezWouldGo

8 years ago

🙄🙄🙄🙄

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RHP User

8 years ago

She cums about half way down the short story. :) Also, it was just a story.

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RHP User

8 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. i hadn't noticed i changed tense. I'll watch out for that. Also, point taken regarding length of time to cum. I guess I was 'skipping' through time a bit to keep the story short.

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RHP User

8 years ago

most guys who attempt erotic fiction either forget or don't even realise that what guys might find a turn on in the written word, will usually be very different to what women will find appealing. If you're going to write about a quick fingerbang and fuck in an alley, you're going to need to be a very creative writer to describe it in a way that makes it erotic for most women. If you want to write more then maybe check out some of the better erotic fiction that's out there first (and no, I'm not talking about 50 Shades).

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